Christopher T. George
Deborah P. Kolodji,
unfinished
book,
Shadows Ink Publications, ISBN 0-932447-55-5, 22 pages, 2006, $6.95.
In this slim but entertaining chapbook, Deborah P. Kolodji, editor and co-founder of
Amaze: The Cinquain Journal and a member of the Haiku Society of America, proves herself to be equally adept at writing longer poems as the five-line cinquains (syllable count 2-4-6-8-2) and the three-line haikus (traditionally 5-7-5) that mostly characterize the book.
The attractive cover of unfinished book shows an array of kitchen vegetables, beets, tomatoes, onions, etc., set against a pale yellow background, and the opening sequence of three haikus is in keeping with the mood of that cover:
unfinished book—
a vegetable garden
not yet planted
birth announcement
an unopened packet
of marigolds
teenage giggles
three pony packs
of impatiens
—an engaging opening, entirely consistent with the earthy sensuality that the poet explores throughout the book, as in the following cinquain:
Gingko in November
gingko
yellow leaf fans
waving autumn goodbye
hitchhiking on wind gusts dropping
silent.
I noted in the beginning that Ms. Kolodji is as proficient in longer forms as in those short forms. Nowhere is this better demonstrated than in the moving poems, “Testament” and “Infidelity”—the former about the death of a loved one and the latter about a nasty divorce. “Infidelity” also nicely ties in with the onions on the cover of the book, the beginning of the poem being:
There is a deli across from the the courthouse
serving six inch submarine sandwiches
the onions always want to make me cry
like the husband I divorced today. . .
The ending of the poem reads as follows:
and each paper became one more skin
to peel away, the round illusion slowly shrinking,
a perfect marriage becoming memory —
once more these onions hurt my eyes
and I’m bleeding tears, pouring salt
all over my rye bread only today
the order was no onions.
unfinished book is a sensitive collection of mainly short form poems but with three longer poems that show the poet has as much great potential as
an original voice in the long form arena as in the short.
© Christopher T. George
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